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All Deviations
All Deviations


The Song of my heart!
It beats and sou--

lol. What the hell is this?
Nothing and you know it. Nobody would like somethin like that, ne?
Sure they would. what makes something good anyway? It's just that you personally like it, right?
Right. Sure. That brings home the bacon. Loving yourself. Gets you.
Nothing?
Nothing.
But what about being outspoken.
Bah nothing there either.
It's all
Just crap . Useless crap?
Yeah. waste of time

What's in it for me anyway? Being outspoken and extroverted?
People you don't want.
Why not? They...
Don't like you? Ridicule you?? Talk about you behind your back. That's
Great. No really, it is.
People BSing you is your cup of tea?
Nah, but then you get people to hang around with and stuff.
To what end?
I dunno... It's just a means to something
A means to something you dont even know. You could choose anything Why
waste the time? I dunno. To make other people feel better?
What about you?
What about me?
It's not like I matter anyways.

I could be outspoken
Outgoing
Extroverted
Sociable
I could tell the world
Fuck it.

Yeah, Fuck it. Fuck you all.
I don't
care what you think about me or my own.
I can talk about shit like naruto and star trek and people
will care
but i dont
right?
right
right.
I can wear stupid things, look stupid, but not be stupid?
Yup
How?
Looks aren't everything.
Try proving that. Nobody really cares anyway. It's all
faces?
faces.
I can win!
Never.
©2004-2008 ~skynx
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A poem I wrote kind of spontaneously after a nite of no sleep. It's... Interesting.
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~MoonlitShadow:iconMoonlitShadow: Nov 22, 2004, 5:32:49 PM
hmm, the only thing i would suggest to improve this is drop out the aim lingo...spell out you are rather than ur...it makes it hard to read in a serious sense...otherwise...very nice stream of conscious.

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!Saki-Marina:iconSaki-Marina: Nov 22, 2004, 11:28:51 PM
I like it, but I think it would be even better if you edited and cleaned it up a bit. Just go over it again, make changes, make it sound and flow better.
:thumbsup:
:)

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~skynx:iconskynx: Nov 24, 2004, 4:44:43 AM
Hmm a good idea ^.^
It was written on a whim, so it was kind of meant to be rough :D

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!Saki-Marina:iconSaki-Marina: Nov 24, 2004, 11:06:41 PM
Yeah... I have plenty of those :)

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